Friday, October 15, 2010

Our Stories

This week we have been learning how to write for an audience so that other people are interested in our stories. We needed to talk about what an audience was. Aria told us that an audience is lots of people in a crowd. A crowd is also a group of people - maybe our friends in our class or people who read our blog - out Mums, Dads, brothers, sisters, grandma, grandad, nana and poppa.

To make our stories interesting, we decided that they needed to be longer (so we wrote for more than one day), have good information in them and they needed to be more exciting.

Here are our stories about the holidays and a Kidpix illustration to match.

1 comment:

  1. WOW! I loved reading your stories Aniwaniwa! I can tell that you have tried to make them longer and have good information in them. I liked how Sophie said the water was so cold it was like being in a freezer. It made me get goose bumps! I can't wait to read more of your stories. Thanks for sharing them :)